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The floor began to creak in the early morning. Without failure; the loud tick-tock of the clock displays the same twilight zone time. It was musky, dark, dismal, and cold, despite the windows being closed.
The wood burning stove cinders were red, which indicated there should be heat. She pondered this for a moment, and suddenly sneezed. Wiping her nose on the sleeve of her filthy robe, she noticed a light red dry dark substance. It was of no concern at the moment.
Briskly walking pass the crooked mirror tacked on the dilapidated wall, the old woman had a few logs scattered in the corner. As she bent down to retrieve them, a mouse scurried over her foot. It didn’t startle her at all. Her goal was to get more heat, to sooth her aching bones. She was always cold.
She threw the remaining wood logs on the stove, grabbed an old frayed blanket, and sat on the only piece of furniture, which was a shabby broken chair, now infested with bed bugs. The old woman paid no mind to it in the sparsely furnished room. She was determined to watch the flame burn, until the sunrise.
This became a reoccurring process. Time always seemed to elude her. Eventually she realized that somehow, the bitter chill that rattled her bones had a connection to the creaking in the floor. It wasn’t until tonight, she was eerily aware that the chill was emitting from her. It is her who made the floor-boards creak.
She is a ghost. She is and has been for many years….Dead.
Have a boo-ti-ful dark Thursday!
4:23 PM
Vera Robinson © 2016

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Jan 21, 2016 @ 20:04:22
This is great! Boootiful.
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Jan 21, 2016 @ 20:22:37
LOL! Thank you. ✌
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Jan 21, 2016 @ 21:27:07
Great story, Ms. Vee. I love the revealing ending. 🙂
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Jan 21, 2016 @ 21:29:50
Thank you so much Eric!
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Jan 23, 2016 @ 14:29:04
I loved the story! Written with simple words with bootiful ending, beautiful. By the way its past my bedtime and now I may not be able to sleep!! :p haha
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Jan 23, 2016 @ 15:23:45
Hello, thank you! Welcome to my raw and simple blog! I hope you are able to sleep peacefully. Phew..it’s a good thing you didn’t read last Thursdays post! Blessings and peace.☺✌
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Jan 23, 2016 @ 22:17:34
You are so sweet!! 😮 now I am curious. Have to read Thursday post! Yes I slept okay. 🙂
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Jan 24, 2016 @ 09:02:29
That’s good to hear! I will get over and explore your blog sometime today. I am going to take a walk and see how much snow is on the ground. We had a blizzard!❄❄❄❄Blessings and peace!☺
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Jan 24, 2016 @ 23:01:35
Hope you stay warm and safe… Take care 🙂
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Jan 25, 2016 @ 18:34:14
Will do!
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Jan 24, 2016 @ 19:29:29
This is sooo you Vee👻! I loved it!
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Jan 24, 2016 @ 19:49:03
Thank you Diana! So nice to see you here again!
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Jan 27, 2016 @ 21:39:43
Awe you’ve been home along time I see. So sorry I didn’t get here sooner. This is a wonderful story I love it.
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Jan 27, 2016 @ 21:41:19
That’s okay. I’m here when the mood strikes.😃
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Jan 27, 2016 @ 21:51:52
I love catching up and reading I’ve missed your beautiful words.
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Jan 27, 2016 @ 21:55:07
Awwwww. Well it is always delightful to see you!!!
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Jan 27, 2016 @ 22:01:02
Yay yay
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