Poetry 101-Rehab Week 2
Prompt Odyssey
Finding solitude in the winter storm
The snowflakes chill my itchy skin
Freeze my burning heart
Emotions conquered
Footprints vanished
Snow continues to fall
Heavier, and heavier
My head feels light
Burying myself deeper
Step by step
The whiteout
Is natures beauty
3:40
Vera Robinson © 2015
Eric
Dec 28, 2015 @ 15:52:34
and even as I finish commenting on one beautiful thing you’ve written…you produce another! 🙂 Lovely, Ms. Vee.
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Ms. Vee
Dec 28, 2015 @ 15:53:41
Thank you so much. You made my day!❤💙
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hooklineandinkwell
Dec 28, 2015 @ 17:26:24
Gorgeous, Vera!!
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Ms. Vee
Dec 28, 2015 @ 17:45:01
Thank you Thomas! Blessings and peace.😁
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hooklineandinkwell
Dec 28, 2015 @ 20:04:09
You are welcome, Vera! Thank you…blessings to you, too, my friend 🙂
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Ms. Vee
Dec 28, 2015 @ 20:05:02
☺
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Nicodemas
Dec 28, 2015 @ 18:51:20
A beautiful poem!
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Ms. Vee
Dec 28, 2015 @ 19:13:22
Thank you Nicodemas! Blessings and peace.
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Nicodemas
Dec 28, 2015 @ 21:16:40
And to you Vera!
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Ms. Vee
Dec 28, 2015 @ 21:18:38
I can never have enough blessings! Thank you.
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Morgan
Dec 31, 2015 @ 14:04:57
Hoping you have a New Year filled with Blessings and Beauty. Thank You Ever So for being part of my 2015.
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Ms. Vee
Dec 31, 2015 @ 15:59:06
Thank you Morgan. Happy New Year to you and your family! Blessings and peace!
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MichelleMarie
Jan 12, 2016 @ 12:20:27
OH wow I love the added snow. How cleaver of you Ms Vee! It’s so beautiful! ❤ Like you!
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Ms. Vee
Jan 12, 2016 @ 14:43:10
I’m glad you liked it. I need to post something. I had bronchitis, and just started feeling better. I think my head is clear. LOL
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nvsubbaraman
Jan 18, 2016 @ 18:10:23
Great Odyssey! Congratulations.
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Ms. Vee
Jan 18, 2016 @ 18:44:18
Thank you!
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