Upon my exhausted arrival, to this marooned island
To my utter amazement, there he stood
A man of sand. He spoke to me in whispers and welcomed me
To this land. I smiled, and shook his gritty hand
His fingers were pebbles, and rough as could be
I pondered the question, just how could this be
That he could live here
A man in the form of sand
I asked “How are you living, made of sand?”
He look at me strangely, as if should know
Then shuffled his feet, as the wind begin to blow
I’m out of the sea; is how I form to be
There are many others like me, as you will come to see
We were all deserted on this island
But our souls are now free
For many hours we talked, until the darkness came
The waves were crashing, it was a beautiful night
He started to sing, til the wind silenced him
I looked to my right; then to the left
There was nothing… just
A pile of red
Sand…
3:21 PM
Vera Robinson © 2015
Sep 03, 2015 @ 16:03:14
Ms. Vee, this is amazing! 🙂 I love the imagery.
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Sep 03, 2015 @ 16:08:32
Thank you Eric. So glad you liked it. I wasn’t sure how to put this together. Your comment is greatly appreciated. 🙂
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Sep 03, 2015 @ 16:11:46
Vivid!
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Sep 03, 2015 @ 16:13:35
Thank you so much! I’m going to get over to your blog a little later, and catch up on your musings. Blessings and peace!
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Sep 03, 2015 @ 18:19:31
OMG!!! I just loved this.. Made me remember my school days & a little of Robinson Crusoe too..
Mystical island.. I wanna go too, will you take me the next time you go Ms.Vee? 😁😁
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Sep 03, 2015 @ 18:23:05
Yes I will, it would be a pleasure. Once we find peace within ourselves, it should be shared! 😁Thank you!!
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Sep 03, 2015 @ 18:24:21
😍😍😍 that’s so true Ms.Vee.. ❤️❤️
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Sep 03, 2015 @ 19:06:17
Imagine the world at peace, if we all shared the same mindset. 🙂
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Sep 03, 2015 @ 20:28:17
A little creepy, but I like it!
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Sep 03, 2015 @ 20:29:29
Ahhh, you haven’t read my creepy post…Thank you Jay! I appreciate your visit, and comment. Blessings and peace! 🙂
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