The lake
Temptation
Seduction
Alluring eyes
Misty rain
Moist lips
Fog eases
Down gently
Engulfing us
During our
Passionate midnight
Kiss…Goodbye
9:33 PM
Vera Jackson © 2013
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Midnight At The Lake
September 24, 2013
Fiction, Nature, Pleasure, Poem, Rain, Wet Blogger, Fog, Kiss, Lake, Midnight, Poet 6 Comments
Sep 24, 2013 @ 22:01:41
Steamy – or shall I say foggy;). Lovely words – I can see in my minds eye this tender romantic scene.
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Sep 24, 2013 @ 22:03:45
Thank you. I wanted to convey the visual aspect in this poem. 🙂
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Sep 25, 2013 @ 07:31:00
and you did an awesome job:)
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Sep 25, 2013 @ 10:59:48
Thanks! 🙂 Have a wonderful day!
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Sep 24, 2013 @ 22:17:53
Love the power even with so few words
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Sep 24, 2013 @ 22:21:16
Thank you. I am glad you liked it!
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