The ticking of the clock
Punctures the silence
The night is breathing softly
The plants are gasping for air
Whispering in the atmosphere
Bend your ear, so you can hear
Soft sounds of the night
They will be gone, once there is
Light
6:47 PM
Vera Jackson © 2013
Aug 24, 2013 @ 19:03:20
I like when you are poetic. There is something gentle and true in what you communicate and, at other times, a bolshy you. A woman of mystical knowledge and insights found in life. A celebration of life lived. Beautiful.x
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 19:23:23
Thank you very much. Your kind words make me feel appreciated. Blessing to you. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 19:27:07
You make me want to be the woman I want to be. It is evident in your words and how you communicate them. Big hugs to you, missus. May your retirement fulfil my aspirations of my own. Time and wisdom and desire.x
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 19:32:55
It seems to me, that you are a wonderful woman. There is always room for us to grow. People like you, have certainly helped me to flourish. It takes a long time to obtain wisdom. Some never learn. Be who you are, and keep that strive. 🙂
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 19:52:00
Your ‘Sexy Woman’ from before could equally describe strong women. passionate women. Or, perhaps, just women. I greatly admire those, both women and men, who strive, endure and become. You are one such person. Truth will always be seen. x
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 20:01:40
Thank you for the lovely words. So many barriers along the paths in life, break women’s spirit. That causes them to give up without a fight. Positive, strong women flaunt, and show they are sexy. They are indeed powerful. Everyday is a challenge.
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 20:08:17
Amen and God bless. Power to you.x
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 20:09:48
God bless you, and your family!
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 20:01:40
Thank you for the lovely words. So many barriers along the paths in life, break women’s spirit. That causes them to give up without a fight. Positive, strong women flaunt, and show they are sexy. They are indeed powerful. Everyday is a challenge.
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 20:31:29
I like the ‘Whispering in the Atmosphere’ part a lot. That’s what the professor seems to do sometimes. Great poem.
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 20:32:54
Thank you. It’s nothing wrong with whispering, just don’t answer yourself.
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 21:49:13
Well, I like answering myself!
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 21:52:57
LOL. Do you do it in another voice?
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 22:04:59
Yes!
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 22:06:19
I knew it! LOL
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 21:27:24
Beautiful yet again Ms. Vee
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 21:36:07
Thank you. Ao glad you liked it.
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 23:09:23
you are such the poet
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 23:13:10
That means more to me than you know. Especially since I have been writing poetry since the end of February, this year.
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 23:19:01
Really, that wonderful!!
You have the talent for it.
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Aug 24, 2013 @ 23:21:39
The words just come to me. I am at peace. 🙂 Thank God!
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